When do you need a structural edit?

Writers frequently face these problems: if you recognize them, you're not alone.

Length and Proportion

The book is too long.
The book is too short but you are not sure where material must be added.
It is too long in some places, too short in others.
Material is repeated.
The point of view differs between sections and you wonder if this is appropriate.

Logical Development

There are breaks in the flow.
Does each section or chapter adequately make its point?
You’ve cut out a lot of material, but you think it might be usable somewhere.

Examples and Evidence

You have lots of examples but are they used effectively? Some are repetitive and others seem marginal.

Beginnings and Endings

Transitions between sections and chapters seem weak.
There are breaks in the logical flow.

Interest and readability

The book might be boring.
You aren’t sure if it will attract your audience.
You aren’t sure who your audience may be.
Will the book have credibility in its field?
You have several profiles of potential readers, but how can you ensure that you appeal to all of them?

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